北京托福培训教育咨询电话
全国咨询热线:9:30~18:00
400-898-0607
图标 主页 > 雅思 > 雅思新闻 > 雅思小作文精批

雅思小作文精批

2018-06-07 17:49 来源:未知 作者:admin
北京托福培训 teachers ‘salaries account(要用过去式) for the largest proportion among five items. it rose from 40% to 50% between 1981 and 1991. then teachers’ salaries fell to 48% in 2001. that was followed by other workers’ salaries (这里要用定语从句,加一个that)sharply decreased from 25% to 15% between 1981 and 2001. and the resources e.g. books rose(可以换一个表示增加的词了,比如grow 或者show an upward trend) from 15% to 20% between 1981 and 1991 before it dropped from(下降到某个数值介词要用to) 9% in 2001. And(前后如果趋势不一样,可以用by contrast相反地) the furniture and equipment dropped(可以换一个表示下降的词,比如decline) from 15% to fell to its lowest point at 5% from 1981 to 1991, and then it rose from(上升到某个数值介词要用to) 22% in 2001. finally, the insures(应该是insurance) was consistently lower than and it was(没有was,把was删掉) rose from 2% to 8% between 1981 to 2001.

Victoria老师提供作文精批

雅思新闻
图标
文章标题:雅思小作文精批
版权申明:本站原创文章,于2018-06-07 17:49,由 北京托福雅思培训思语国际教育发表。
下一篇:没有了