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Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do, but others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems well by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Children are obligated to obey rules or carry out tasks given by their parents and teachers. However, some people argue that this behavior would weaken children’s ability to deal with problems independently. From my perspective, I believe that it depends on different aspects.
On a moral and behavioral level, the rules of parents and teachers can direct children in a good way. This is because children are too young to have the ability to recognize the rights and wrongs which requires certain life experience. To be specifically, parents and teachers impart children to be honest, patient and friendly when get(getting) along with families and friends. By contrast, if children are not taught to be kind(in their formative years), they probably cannot(hardly) make friends(build good social relationship这样会更好一点) with others (after growing up). Consequently, they likely feel lonely and isolated even(even是副词,不是连接词) show anti-social behavior. Therefore, obeying rules of morality and behavior is attached with importance to children.
On the other hand, children should be given more freedom in terms of choices. Parents and teachers should consciously develop the independence of children. For example, faced with the choice of travel destination, children can express their ideas and plans creatively to persuade their parents, thus enhancing their independent thinking and decision-making skills. That prepares them for future campus life and employment. As a result, a bit less control also cultivates many life skills of children.
In conclusion, children should be given more freedom on the basis of reasonable conduction from parents and teachers.
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